A portion of Samaneh's winning essay:
What would you do if:
You moved your family to a new country to start from scratch to
ensure them a better future, but all your life memories and belongings
are stolen from a U-Haul. You realize that all of a sudden you cannot
see your own father simply because he is Middle Eastern and therefore
cannot get back into the country due to the fact that he is of the
same race as some of the terrorists, while having to take care of
your family on your own, working 30 plus hours to fulfill your family
obligation without pay. Your seventeen year-old sister gets blood
deficiency problems, your father gets a heart attack and you cannot
be there with him, your mother is diagnosed with breast cancer and
has to undergo surgery and chemotherapy without her own husband.
Another doctor tells your mother that she needs a hysterectomy and
might even have cancer there too. Your family members don't have
the time to help you, you struggle on your own and keep on a positive
attitude so that your family may hold it together.
My name is Samaneh Pourjalali. After arriving in America, my family's
possessions were stolen and my parents had to start over. They had
sacrificed so much; I was determined to excel and give back to them.
Each day I repeated: "I came here to make it. My family depends
on me." While adapting to a new culture, I maintained straight
As. I majored in psychology and philosophy to turn my experiences
into wisdom.
I have done a research for an Oxford University conference. I
tutor voluntarily on campus. I initiated web communication at church.
As president of Phi Theta Kappa, the international honors society
at Mt. San Antonio College, I organize events to fight cancer, which
is especially important since my mom has breast cancer. I organize
events and go to schools that would stop children from smoking.
I ran a campus-wide event called "Can Science and Religion
Reconcile?", with a record attendance showcasing commonalities
among various points of view. I initiated a program called adopt
a scholar to help bright honors students pay for their admission
fee into PTK. I, too, am saddened by the fact that good students
are financially limited to continue their education.
I am currently engaged in research for a world renowned scholar,
Michael Shermer, in his up-coming book. I have been nominated as
Student of Distinction for Academic Achievement. I won the All-California
Academic Team Competition and will have lunch with the governor
and secretary of state on April 6th of this year. I have been published
twice. Once in the Honors Transfer Council Journal and I write columns
in a Persian magazine on philosophical and psychological issues.
I have done all of the above while maintaining a GPA of 3.94.
The Main Reason I Need Your Assistance --
My mother’s chemotherapy treatments are to start within the next
few weeks and therefore I can not go to school away from home. I
have applied to the Claremont Colleges such as Pomona, Scripps,
Pitzer, McKenna because they are the closest to home so that I may
take care of my mom and my little sister. I am unable to get financial
aid and am left alone in this time of need.
I do a lot for the community and am willing to donate my time
and efforts to you in any way that I can. If I may help with promoting
your organization I will do so. If I may help with research I shall
do it. It will be a small method of giving back. As I mentioned,
I initiated a scholarship program at my own school. I am not begging
for money, I will assist you in any way that I can.
Here is a little background on me, my achievements and my goals:
The legendary news figure David Brinkley once said "a successful
man is one who can lay a firm foundation with the bricks others
throw at him." My life has indeed been a target to its fair
share of challenges only to positively shape the precise academic
path that I reside on now.
Ever since the age of three I have traveled extensively to various countries in Europe and the West. Living different countries and within diverse cultures I was able to familiarize and adapt myself with the different types of traditions and people. I was interested at how human behaviors, mentalities and philosophies would change with respects to customs and circumstances. Through my traveling I surprised myself at how I was able to communicate and from relationships with all kinds of ethnicities and the states of mind that followed arose from them. I also had to move form one country to another every four years and had to tear and reestablish my roots in different circumstances. In the years abroad I was able learn English and in turn tutor a partially blind girl who only possessed twenty percent vision. I had to learn to form a bond with her, gain her trust and teach her the English language. I had to use multi-sensory methods of learning and use her cognitive skills rather than methods of direct application. It was through helping her and a dyslexic teenager after her, that my passion for understanding the complexity human psychology and its many elements.
When I came to America, my family and I were not in a good financial situation. On the way to California a U-haul that the loaded with our assets was broken into and everything we owned was taken away- all that we owned, except for the clothing that we were wearing at the time. Every new item we had purchased to start our new life and all our memorable belongings were taken away. My parents had worked very hard to build a life of 26 years from ground zero and in the sight of the empty, glass shattered U-Haul, they knew they had no choice but to start over to rebuild our new life from ground zero. After a few days of dealing with the shock of what I was still unable to believe, I decided that as a psychology major I should be able to help myself turn my wounds into wisdom.
When I entered community college my passion for psychology led me to be the primary research assistant to my psychology professor Dr John Long, in a research paper that he would present at a conference at Oxford University. The topic was "Women and Leadership " and it was a success after ten months of rigorous research. Psychology is a major that I have chosen with a full understanding and I plan to continue with in this area to fulfill my thirst for a better comprehension of the human mind. Philosophy is the minor which I have chosen as a field that not only encompasses an array of information that enhances the critical thinking skills essential to and complimentary to psychology. My zeal for psychology and philosophy has impressed the world renowned and celebrated Dr. Michael Shermer, founder of Skeptic Magazine who been a guest star on Oprah, Donahue, 20/20, Unsolved Mysteries, Larry King and the like, has asked for my assistance in upcoming book. Michael Shermer was one of the three panelists I invited for an event that my team and I organized on Campus (I have enclosed a letter of recommendation from him as well to show how what an honorable man he is and how impressed he was with my performance).
The day I came to America, I rehearsed one statement in my mind: "I came here to make it." I knew I have been given an extraordinary opportunity, and I would do all that I could to excel and give back to my family for all they had sacrificed for me.
At Mt. San Antonio College I have participated in an immense amount of volunteer activities and leadership positions that have been reflective of my interest in psychology due to the altruistic intent that belies these activities and the skills that I have been able to demonstrate from my readings on psychology. I have volunteered as a tutor at our Math Assistance Center, I have participated as a member in the International Honors Society Phi Theta Kappa (I later became the President of this organization). I have participated in event that passed out information and raised money and awareness towards various cancers such as breast cancer and lung cancer. As the President of Phi Theta Kappa I have conducted a major campus project that had a record attendance and a great feedback from the faculty, the students and the guest panelists (The event was "Can Science and Religion Reconcile"). I also initiated the first program that would help honors students pay the admission fee for Phi Theta Kappa so that they would be eligible for future scholarships and recognition. Currently I am working with the student government on initiating the first campus wide paper recycling system. I have also been published twice: once in a Persian Magazine in which I have written columns on current important issues within the field of psychology, the other was in the Honors Transfer Council Journal on the topic of the "Meme Theory." I have currently been nominated as student of distinction for Academic Achievement as well as been selected on the All California Academic Team. Primarily only two people out of the whole college and later only a few out of all of California were selected. I will be going to Sacramento to have lunch with the governor and other government officials on April 6th.
I not only plan to graduate from University but also continue my lifelong pursuit of knowledge as I grant my services as a future university professor. This means that apart from being trained at my future university I also want to one day contribute to its community that I so deeply care about. It would be an honor to become a member of such a respectable group of intellectuals, professors, who contribute their efforts to students within academia.
Ever since my mother was diagnosed with breast cancer my choices for the majors that I have selected have even more personal. Through philosophy I can comfort my mother by reminding her about the values in life. By means of psychology I may possess knowledge of effective methods that would help in comforting her during her battle with this disease. I have not, at any other instance in my life, been more convinced of having made the correct decision about my major and minor. I am happy to have been able to grow and thrive to this extent and I know I owe it all to my professors and the special effort and dedication they make to ensure the academic and life long success of their students-their friends.
I am dedicated and motivated to continue my education to a doctorate. Give me the chance to prove to you that I will be the most eager student you will ever encounter by helping me get boundaries that may limit me financially.
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