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A portion of Kristel's winning essay:
My family and I immigrated to the United States from Canada the summer prior
to my eight grade year. Although I could speak English, I only received one
hour of basic English instruction per day, beginning in fourth grade, at the
French schools I attended. When I moved to the United States, I began
attending an English school. With hard work and perseverance I succeeded at
my new school, graduating first in my class. I still faced the challenges of
living in a foreign country, however. This experience motivated me to devote
my time to helping immigrants in the United States, especially those with a
language barrier. I began volunteering as a teacher's aide at an "English as
a Second Language" program sponsored by the local community college. There I
helped with the basic adult English class. The experience of helping
immigrants through the "English as a Second Language" program has also
inspired me to create a tutoring program to reach out to the children of my
adult students who needed help with schoolwork, and could not look to their
parents for assistance. My participation in an "English as a Second
Language" class and the creation of my tutoring program has been rewarding
to me because it has allowed me to use my experiences and challenges in life
to help others. I believe that my volunteer work with the "English as a
Second Language" program and the creation of my tutoring program demonstrate
my commitment to help unite diverse cultures and reach out to diverse
peoples in the United States. I am confident my commitment to postgraduate
education will allow me to continue this service in my community because it
would give me the tools necessary to further educate those in my community.
With the knowledge I gain from higher education, I believe I would be able
to reach out to the members of my community who are in need. Seeing the
struggles of other immigrants such as myself in my community has allowed me
to realize the opportunities afforded to Americans through post-secondary
education. As a young woman in the land of opportunity of the United States,
I am positive that for me, my post-secondary experience will not only help
me gain knowledge and experience, but will allow me to better reach out to
those around me.
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