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A portion of Brad's winning essay:
Saving for college is something that my family has valued since I was a
small child. For my two brothers and me, monetary birthday gifts were at
least partially put in our savings accounts, with the goal of paying for
college tuition. When I began delivering newspapers at age nine, my earnings
were targeted for college savings. The paper route definitely helped me
learn the value of money because I worked hard for what I earned from
delivering the approximately 35 papers, six days per week. My parents were
available to drive me on Sunday mornings, but weekday afternoons I rode my
bike. The paper route continued for four years. My next job was summertime
detasseling in the Iowa cornfields. Known as dirty and hot work performed in
humid July weather, I've grown accustomed to the routine of walking through
the tall rows of corn, pulling tassels and throwing them to the ground in
preparation for harvest by the seed corn company Pioneer. The seed corn
companies provide better hourly wages than many jobs, and even though it's
short lived, the earnings beef up my college fund each summer. I've been
part of the same detasseling crew for four years, beginning the summer after
8th grade. When I turned sixteen, I started work as a cashier at the local
grocery store, and I have now worked there more than two years,
approximately two to three shifts per week. I plan to work at the grocery
store until I leave for college in August, 2007. However, the savings from
nine years of working pale in comparison to the costs of college. While it
seems that I am conservative with my money, my personal savings amount to
about one year of costs at a public university. Thus, scholarships that I
can earn due to merit or my family's financial need will be extremely
welcome in order for me to reach my goal of graduating in an environmental
engineering program, and possibly attending graduate school. My goals for
school include spending at least one summer in a Spanish-speaking country
because I've taken four years of Spanish and am considering a college minor
in the subject. The time spent in a summer academic program will limit my
summer earning capacity for at least one summer, which is another reason any
merit scholarships that I can earn will be extremely helpful to me reaching
my goals. In addition, the curriculum of an engineering student is very
demanding, so it may be difficult to maintain employment while enrolled in
college. There will likely be opportunities for jobs assisting professors
with research once I am an upperclassman, which sounds extremely rewarding,
but likely not high-paying. The costs of attending college and possibly
graduate school have never deterred me from my goal. However, a
StraightForward Media Engineering School Scholarship would be extremely
helpful with my life-long goal of graduating from college.
Math has long been a favorite subject of mine, and teachers and other adults
regularly remarked how my talent for math would surely lead me to pursue a
career in accounting or finance. My decision to enroll in college-level
economics courses while a sophomore in high school was based on the
assumption that I would pursue a career relating to money and finance.
Little did I know that my exposure to economics and finance would lead me
instead in a very different direction. Economics is based on the allocation
of goods and services, and the coursework caused me to consider our global
economy's dependence on adequate resources. In a world in which our
population is expanding, resources like clean water, food, and energy are
becoming increasingly scarce. From this perspective, the study of accounting
or finance seemed inconsequential, but I wasn't sure what would replace it
as a likely career. Eighteen months ago, a summertime mission trip to a
Chicago homeless shelter further triggered my desire to help in a meaningful
way. As residents of a small Iowa community that sits in the middle of some
of the best farmland in the world, hunger and need were not everyday
concerns for my fellow students and me. However, our youth group's visit to
the South Side shelter challenged all my previous assumptions about
homelessness and poverty. I'll never forget our arrival at the shelter. As
the dozen members of my youth group walked inside the dismal building, we
gazed around at a room full of people. An awkward silence lasted only a few
seconds before we were invited to pull up a chair, sit down, and learn how
to play a new card game. As we laughed along with our hosts and answered
questions about where we were from, it was easy to forget that these people
had no real home, no money, no food, no nothing. As we connected through the
card game, I didn't think of them as homeless people; they were simply
people. When I returned to Iowa, my thoughts continually returned to the
people I had met. Although it was unique to have been a minority for a few
days and exciting to be in a big city, it was seeing homelessness in person
that weighed on me. I'd heard stories of people who are homeless, and it was
easy to think it was their own fault. However, these "victims of
circumstance" were different because I could put a name and face with them.
I now had a deeper understanding of entrenched poverty and how victims are
born into it without choice. The resources available to the people of the
shelter paled in comparison with those of an average high school student in
my community. "Why?" I wondered. Why is it that society values the
entertainment industry so much that celebrities can afford to spend an
average person's salary on clothes, but does not value humanity enough to
ensure that everyone in our country has enough food? I realized that the
poverty I witnessed at that one Chicago shelter was a miniscule piece of the
suffering that exists worldwide, which left me even more frustrated. My
unanswered questions have not yet left my mind. It's evident that the cycle
of poverty can be broken only when necessary resources are more readily
available to everyone. The issue of who gets what is destined to become more
difficult as the global population expands exponentially. Its potential to
create an even bigger gap between rich and poor and between nations that can
afford to feed their people and nations that cannot could create an uneasy
world in my lifetime. How could I help break the cycle? I was further nudged
toward a career in engineering when a promotional brochure from the
university I was interested in attending arrived in my mailbox my junior
year in high school. My national merit test scores in science and math had
prompted many such mailings. "Ten signs that engineering could be right for
you," the brochure read. "#1 You're good at math and science. #2 You're
curious. #3 You'd like to make a difference in our world in very practical
ways," and the list went on. I could identify with each of the statements,
and I was encouraged to keep reading. "Engineering: the problem solving
profession" the brochure boldly stated. I want to study a discipline that
focuses on solving problems. My decision to study engineering had evolved.
The revelation prompted me to research the various fields of engineering to
learn what discipline would best equip me to help. Environmental engineering
is the field I have decided to pursue. At the University of Iowa, which is
just two hours from my hometown, renowned programs in engineering allow
students to help research various ways to help improve our communities, the
environment, and global agriculture. The possibilities are endless, and the
opportunity to be a problem solver is exciting. As an engineering student I
will acquire the knowledge and tools to solve problems, and with a focus in
environmental engineering, I can eventually contribute to a solution-perhaps
even one that makes strides toward eliminating hunger. Creating new sources
of renewable energy, improving methods of growing food in varying climates,
and designing tools to clean up after a burgeoning human population would be
within my realm as an environmental engineer. The future excites me because
I feel like I have found what I was meant to do. I'm counting on time and
further education to reinforce my instinct.
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